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Sovereign Lady xxx 🩷's avatar

"I’m so glad I read the whole post—the combo of your intro and this poem is absolute magic! Seeing your journey from shrinking to standing grounded in the intro makes the poem hit so much harder.

​'I’m shedding insecurities faster than skin cells' setting up 'put it back together with super glue' is just brilliant.

Refusing to take on other people’s misinterpretations while staying open to real conversation is such a powerful stance. So raw, so authentic, and beautifully written!

Love ♥️ ❤️ 😍 you xxx

Of Being the Art's avatar

I appreciate you reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Punk Rock Pixie 🇨🇦's avatar

Love it.

And I so appreciate "But I am shedding insecurities faster than skin cells." Fan-fucking-tastic!

Of Being the Art's avatar

Ah thanks! I really appreciate you reading.

Mara Ellison's avatar

I really like that about you. You don’t smooth over things when you are not understood. You ask the extra questions when you don’t understand. You are curious, and that is such a beautiful quality. I can learn a lot from you. I need to shut up sometimes, and ask more questions 😊❤️

Of Being the Art's avatar

Mara you have so quickly become one of my favorite people here. I love going back and forth with you on whatever tangent I’m on, it feels safe to because I see you as being curious too. Don’t ever shut up. We’re learning from each other.

This is a quote from a convo between Alex and I in the comments on his post. I highly recommend reading it.

“Each conversation with a person brings their linguistic worlds closer together. And it may not be perfect exactness, but it's beautiful and worth pursuing.”

🫶

Mara Ellison's avatar

I feel the same way ☺️ I knew pretty quicky that you were my kind of person. Even though I have some nice connection here, I really only have one or two people that I would call friends. And you are becoming one of them. 🤗

I will definitely give it a read!

Greg McKee's avatar

This poem! It gets so much across in 10 lines, I love it

Of Being the Art's avatar

Ah thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

Viktoria St. Patrick's avatar

Thank you for sharing, loved reading this.

Curiosity is a wonderful quality. It comes with an open mind, a willingness to learn, to question, to embrace new ideas and to express your own views.

What I also see is someone who is finally standing their ground after shrinking themselves for far too long.

No one should ever put another person in a box. That’s not how we grow and it’s certainly not how we learn from one another.

Your closing lines captured that beautifully. They had already chosen their version of you and had no interest in seeing yours.

We all yearn to be understood, yet so often we are misunderstood. We long for validation to live as our authentic selves, but that validation doesn’t always come and perhaps it never will. The important part is learning to validate ourselves.

Of Being the Art's avatar

Absolutely. It feels good too!

Thank you for reading. I appreciate you taking the time to comment also.

Viktoria St. Patrick's avatar

👌🏼🥰