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Carawen's avatar

I love this. Such an interesting and unexpected turn to the poet. It's beautiful.

I love fireflies. The first time I saw a forest full of them was one of the most magical things I've ever experienced ✨

The Art of Being's avatar

Thank you! They are so magical I wish I could see them more often.

Petra's avatar

There is such compassion woven through this poem. I love the ending. Hope is such a beautiful thing. <3

The Art of Being's avatar

Thank you so much for reading and taking time to comment.

Petra's avatar

<3

Meera's avatar

This is so beautiful. It reminds of fireflies i saw once upon a time in summertime at my maternal grandma’s place. They seem so magical but i haven’t seen them in such a long time now.

Your poem brought me so much comfort and magic and nostalgia. Thank you♥️

The Art of Being's avatar

Thank you Meera! I’m glad you liked it ☺️

Meera's avatar

I did. Thank you for sharing🤗

Will G.'s avatar

Love this!!! ❤️❤️

The Art of Being's avatar

Thank you dear! 🫶

James (HVR)'s avatar

I hope they do find peace at night.

Libra's avatar

❤️🫶🏼🤷🫂🥰🎉

Libra's avatar

👐

Libra's avatar

Lovely. Amazingly written.

The Art of Being's avatar

Thank you so much. ☺️